Hello My name is Zeb and i`m going to tell you about my writing. We had to pick our own crayon and write about it. I chose green because I stepped on him when I got a crayon pack for the first time and its my favourite crayon.
I worked really hard on it hope you like it!
Zeb,
Green crayon here.
WHY did you step on ME!? ... it´s like you forgot about me.
Why did you leave me on the floor in the first place!?
Me and the other half of my body are having a hard time... he is literally holding me in his hands right NOW!
One other thing i`m sad is because you replaced me!
You could have cello-taped me back on or pined me back on...actually no that would be painful.
Just can you use me again please?
Your favourite colour,
Green crayon.
That`s my writing can you please comment on whether you liked it or not or just give me some feed back.
Oh my gosh Zeb I love it well done
ReplyDeleteExcellent work Zeb! You have not only set out your blog post beautifully but created a piece of writing that hooks in the reader! I can really see Green Crayon's frustration... do you think you will start using him again now?
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