Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 26 June 2020
Character description
if you don`t know he is you will know now because of my c
character description and hes a book.
Here is my character description.
I hope you now know what he looks like.
hopefully you liked it comment if you liked my character description thank you forreading this blog post bye.
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Kia ora Zeb,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed you description of Grandpa Chatterji. As I read it I could see a picture forming in my head of an old man in white trousers bent over a wee bit with a sore back, although reading on i do wonder if someone who meditates would have a sore back?
Maybe next time you could add and image you have created of what you think he would look like?
Nga mihi,
Mark