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-intro/introduction/5 W's/what,when,why,who,were.
-main body/time connectors
-conclusion/feelings/thoughts.
It went well because I knew the stuff for my Google docs post.
I think I have to work on next time is Capitols because I keep on forgetting!
what would you do if you were there
this is my Google docs story about the surface pressure experiment
Hi, my name is Fox and I am from New Brighton Catholic School. I liked how you said what happened in the balloon experiment and I think a balloon experiment sounds really cool! I think you need to work on your punctuation because I didn´t see many full stops in this blog post. What did you like in the experiment?
ReplyDeletethanks Fox. The thing that I liked was seeing how much people could stand on the balloons. I will work on my punctuation,but by the way how are you doing?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Mayah,and i am from new Brighton Catholic school good effort Zeb!!
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