W.A.L.T appreciate the work of others.
Hello my name is Zeb today me and my class had to make a comment to Hey Park School
We all had to choose a person and I chose Barney.
I liked what he did so I gave him a comment.
Here is my comment.
Hello Barney i`m Zeb from new Brighton catholic school I am a year 5.I really liked it when you talked about the person who talked to you about what you had to do.this reminded me of a time when I played the piano i was pretty bad at it.Maybe you can write more to tell us more about what happened.anyway I really liked your blog post.
Thank you f reading this weeks blog post I hope you liked it
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