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 W.A.L.T write a persuasive letter

in room 2 we are going to have a dog in the classroom.
hes called Charlie he is a spoodle of Miss Pownall and we have to try and persuade Miss Pownall and Miss Danes and this is my letter.



Zeb WB. Miss Pownall
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Room 2 NBC
Room 2





Greetings Miss Pownall.



I believe we should have a dog in the classroom.

Why?

These are my three reasons to make you think we should have a dog in the classroom. 

Firstly
They will help us learn to look after other things.
Studies have shown.
Pets especially dogs and cats can reduce stress anxiety and depression, ease loneliness, encourage exercise and playfulness, and even improve your cardiovascular health. Caring for an animal can help children grow up more secure and active.
Pets also provide valuable companionship for older adults.
Like my Dad he didnt really want a dog but now he loves our dog because she was soo cute.

Secondly is they help you relax.
Studies have shown.
Playing with a dog or a cat can elevate levels of serotonin and dopamine,
Wich calm and relax.
Pet owners have lower triglyceride cholesterol levels (indicators of heart disease)
Then those without pets.
Like a time when i was doing something i didn't know what to do then my dog came
and helped me relax.


Thirdly doges are soooo cute they are the cutest animals on earth for me.
Studies have shown A recent study has discovered that it's no accident that we are
drawn to canines and find them terribly cute According to Uncover California, the reason
we find dogs so cute is something called the domestication syndrome. ...
This explains why a wild dog, or wolf, look similar to a dog but just isn't quite the same.
When i get home i cant resist patting my dog she is soo cute!


In Conclusion..we should have a dog in the classroom because they will
help you look after other things
then they help you relax and lastly they are so cute.
This is why we should have a dog in the classroom

Hope you like it!












1 comment:

  1. Brilliant, I'm sold let's get another one Zeb. Love mummy

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